Grounded
A heart searching for compassion-
Where does my heart go…
when I, want to abscond?
How do I accomplish to make it stay?
Emotional and physical distress are the indications to take a rest.
If I had the strength that I need,
I'd Leave behind,
What is not for me…
Confiscate my dignity
and Flee…
My heart sits on the trust of my body,
To support and be carried.
I strive to take the deed,
I need to be free…
Release me from the thick chains ⛓️
Of poverty Living!
Empty souls
Don't feed
Empty spirits…
They grab
For what's left 👈…
Attempt to get more of what was already given…
Pay attention and know
The difference between real love❤️✌️and friends/foes
I guess the heart sits still…
I tried to bury my feelings, and enjoy the thrills,
But what good is love if you can't feel it?
-
(Sometimes my heart tells me)
“It is better to be alone even if with a heart full of gold, one day will be your time to regain consciousness -”
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Comments (40)
'But what good is love if you can't feel it?' - Wow, just Wow!
Wow! I’m floored man. This is high quality poetry here. I resonated with so much. I especially loved the last line, “what good is love if you can’t feel it”. Congrats on a well deserved TS
Bravoo, nicely written
Well done Louii - congrats!
Love that does not feel good but is chosen, is the very sacrificial love needed to change the world.
Congrats, toou have a good story very good..
Congratulations on your Top Story🧨💞💥
Wonderful and full of feeling. Thanks for sharing and congrats on the TS ❤️
Great top story… great message 🤍🙏✨🕊️🩷
Lovely poem, great work and great reminder to follow your heart! It always knows!! Congratulations on Top Story!
The heart knows. So very well written, Lonzo! Congratulations1
Congratulations on such a super heartfelt top story 🤍
Being comfortable alone is a powerful state of being. ❤❤❤
I'm sure at one time or another, we all feel like this. Nice work!!
Nice words
Beautifully said ❤️❤️
I love my mind, brain hurts tho
That is fantastic, Lonzo! I read it several times to let it really sink in. Nicely done!
That last line meant a lot to me. Sometimes I feel like I need to regain consciousness too. Great work here my friend 🥰💓💓 congratulations on top story
Congrats, Lonzo! This is one of those poems that makes you wonder. It was deep. 💖
Congratulations on your Top Story, well deserved
Beautifully written! Simply loved it
Hey you! Congrats on the TS, my friend.
Honest and heartfelt x Beautifully done 🤍
Congrats on top story!