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Grief's Remains

A Haiku

By Loryne AndaweyPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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Grief's Remains
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With a hollow heart

You’ll find you can keep going

Long after you can’t

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Loryne Andawey

Health, Happiness & Abundance.

Currently enjoying the company of Francis, Mike, C.H., Gammastack, Michelle, Cosimo, Kristen, Bronson, Bella, Talia, Sean, Babs, Kelli, Rick, Dharrsheena, Heather, Gina and many, many more!

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  • Ahna Lewis7 months ago

    Ahh, so sad, but carries such truth. Well done!

  • Sadly, that's the only thing we can do!

  • Jessica Dowding7 months ago

    Poignantly put. Great work!

  • But oh, the emptiness, numbly moving on.

  • Poppy 7 months ago

    Hey, just letting you know I shared this poem in my story Poppy's Preferences: https://vocal.media/journal/poppy-s-preferences-pt-5

  • Poppy 7 months ago

    This is such a great message. Well done

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Good one! I could see this on a greeting card or T-shirt. It says so much.

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a year ago

    Sometimes we're just propelled by the will to move on, even if we feel that we've got nothing left to live for. Instinct isn't a unique trait, but more often than not it's a necessary one. Paradise isn't always promised, but we'll never know if we stop to lie down. Sometimes, it's important to keep moving, just for the sake of it, if not ourselves.

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Very relatable, hearted and subscribe. Cannot wait to read more of your stories 💗♥️

  • PK Colleranabout a year ago

    Very moving. Thank you.

  • Gina B.about a year ago

    Incredibly poignant

  • Wilkie Stewartabout a year ago

    Touching!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Wonderful, emotional work, and this definitely qualifies!! 😍😍

  • Andrew-Stuartabout a year ago

    Superb 😁

  • KJ Aartilaabout a year ago

    This is "timely." Well done!

  • Gerald Holmesabout a year ago

    I can feel this. Well done.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fantastic, absolutely fantastic!!!💕💕💖

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh my. This is beautiful. Well done

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh goodness, this says so much. I can relate. Beautiful work :)

  • I feel this

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