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rainy day thoughts

By Vadim KaganPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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Gray
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My dear sun

The clouds are in

The day is gray

You are the one

But woods are green

And full of prey

All flesh is weak

All flesh is grass

All flesh is seed

It's hide and seek

For both of us

Then let’s proceed

Tall are the ferns

And soft is bark

So let us roam

Before it turns

Completely dark

And we go home

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About the Creator

Vadim Kagan

I believe that each day is a blessing, every story is amazing and all poems should rhyme!

Instagram: @wines_and_rhymes

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    This was absolutely wonderful! Loved your poem so much!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a month ago

    yes, yes...I love this rhythm. Great poem

  • Silver Serpent Booksabout a month ago

    Beautiful poem! It's been raining here for a few days so it's oddly timely. Great as always!

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    Oh love this. Love the short and snappy lines and the beautiful flow. Well done, Vadim. I am a big lover of a rainy day (helps make things easier living in Scotland, lol), so appreciate this.

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