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Grapes of Putrescence

for "The Sonnet of Shadows" challenge #1

By Imola TóthPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Winner in The Sonnet of Shadows Challenge
Grapes of Putrescence
Photo by Arthur Podzolkin on Unsplash

They once gleamed with velvet in the sun,

indigo skin aglow with carmine flame;

the air was drunk as sweetness just begun,

beauty sculpted slowly as decay came.

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But time, with bruising hand, is here to claim

what once belonged to life, adorned in vivid flesh;

silken worms and lustrous flies now join the game,

as fragrance ripe with rot calls them to the catch.

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O fruit, that teaches love: what once was ripe and fresh

can be the ruin for us all like sour wine;

in each bite the ghost of pleasure leaves caress

to show that even in decay, beauty is divine.

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For only when you fall, and sweetness spills,

does the tongue learn how desire ripens, and kills.

This poem was born as the result of my attempt to write a sonnet to "The Sonnet of Shadows" challenge.

I decided to go with the Spencerian sonnet with the rhyme scheme of abab bcbcb cdcd ee. Which I don't know how much I nailed because my mind goes blank whenever I try to find rhyming words. (Don't even think of expecting a iambic pentameter from me in English... It wasn't mentioned in the prompt anyway...)

My muse was a bunch of grapes I forgot on a rock once in the forest at work, and the next day I found it half rotten, covered in sticky juice, flies and worms. Yet, somehow there was still something beautiful in it. (IKR? My mom says I am a bit morbid sometimes.)

It might sound grotesque, but the idea to write about it came when the other day we passed by a corpse of a deer that was hit by a car, and just left there by the road. It reminded me of one of my favorite poems, The Carcass by Baudelaire.

For the title, I choose my old poetry tumblr blog's name.

I never liked sonnets because most of what we read at school were cheesy, all about love but after doing some research I figured people wrote all kinds of creepy, dark and disturbing sonnets. So why not?

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    Written by Imola Tóth