Gone Before Dawn
It was My Pursuit to be once more in your arms...
When Dawn Creeps Out
From Behind the Scenes,
I’ll be gone…
But during the night
I need you to hold me tight.
Stay with me, no sex 🚫
Just lay with me for a while…
I could feel your sympathy
And see the smile in your eyes.
You were happy to have me once furthermore...
But I don't know if I can abide,
Love from one side...
I was so in love with you, but you had no clue,
Of what to do,
With the power of love,
I disseminated it to you...
Furthermore, Snuggle me until I dream,
Because in the morning
I must flee...
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Comments (19)
So Romantic
“So snuggle me until I dream, Because in the morning I must flee...” Lonzo, I love your way with words!! 😍😍
Amazing!!! 💖💖💕
Yet another great poem from you!
Very nice.
Very good
Beautiful work, Lonzo!
with nice thoughts
Deep and emotional as usual!
Wow! Heartbreaking love. So perfectly expressed that reading this actually gave me a desperate feeling in my gut. Love it, Lonzo. Bravo!
Lonzo!!! You are getting really good at this poetry writing. Again this is one of your best. Outstanding!
I remember being in this position, I knew the relationship was ending (and needed to end), but it was my birthday. So I let her hold me and say goodnight. The morning was hell.
Wonderful
Very sad poem, what’s the reason for the flee ?
beautiful!
That enigma of love. Fleeting and lovely all at once,
conveys a sense of intimacy, uncertainty, and the fleeting nature of relationships.
The heartbreaking aspect of love. Very beautifully written!
How often is the response to unrequited love that reassuring cuddle or embrace. And how often we allow it to console, knowing there is no consolation. Once again, Lonzo, beautifully expressed.