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Glorious Hard-Muscled Flesh

A sight to behold

By Colleen Millsteed Published about a month ago 1 min read
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Excitement ripples through the air,

The sky is blue and the day is fair.

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The ladies dressed in silk and feathers,

The gentlemen in plaids and leathers.

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The aromatic smells waft upon the breeze,

As steaks are barbecued upon grilled cheese.

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The queue stretch along the crest,

Tickets are given at each behest.

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Friends meet in social delight,

Anticipating the fun over the last fortnight.

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Announcements ring clear for all ears,

Names are called to laughter and cheers.

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Parades are held off to the right,

And music will commence later that night.

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Champagne toasts from a raised glass,

With picnic rugs spread upon the grass.

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The men hold beers icy cold,

As the previous results now lay old.

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Feet thunder as they push through a boost,

Don’t count your chickens before they roost.

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The mighty turn the corner, closing the gap,

As they run the stretch of the last lap.

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The race has been won by an outsider,

All due to the jockey being the best rider.

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Owners celebrate as their horses pace,

Beaming after winning a famous race.

This poem was written in response to a prompt from CJ Coop and Lodestar Gazette (Medium Writer and Publication). The prompt I chose to run with is as follows :

13th: Grand National: Describe a horse race that we only know is a horse race right at the end. Create a Story/poem with a horse in the story.

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About the Creator

Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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  • ROCK about a month ago

    I loved this; I thought it might be a surprise party, but definitely in a warmer climate! I went to the big horse race ( Preakness?)!in Maryland and have been to the Louisville Kentucky derby. This was a delightful reminder and well written!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Okay did an amazing job at this because I was so shocked at the ending. It came completely out of left field! Well done!

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