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Glimmer

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By Rowan Finley Published 16 days ago 1 min read
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Attention, they stand.

Fork in the road, or jail too?

She likes their glimmer.

surreal poetryHaiku
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About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. Aspiring licensed mental health counselor. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Andrea Corwin 4 days ago

    NIce one - shadow is a jail. Love it!

  • Archery Owl16 days ago

    This made me think of trying to make a decision- left or right - and then being paralyzed. Like standing at a fork in the road and being stuck in jail and unable to move forward. Great job!

  • Ameer Bibi16 days ago

    Excellent story Fabolous

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