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from the ashes

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By Kayleigh Fraser ✨Published about a month ago 1 min read
from the ashes
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The fire consumed, there was no defence.

Superficial flames grew intense.

I could never stand pretence.

Lies served to cinderise.

All of the beauty

that once glittered

in your eyes?

Simply

died.

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Kayleigh Fraser ✨

philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health & love related 💫

“When life gives you lemons,

Know you are asking for them.

If you want oranges, focus on oranges”

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Comments (4)

  • ThatWriterWomanabout a month ago

    Oooh yes Kayleigh! Cinderise! What an excellent word!

  • Gina C.about a month ago

    You did this so well! It's always a turning point when you no longer see someone in the same light. Bittersweet, but almost a relief in the midst of a breakup ❤️

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    Like Dharrsheena I loved the cinderise line. Very deftly done!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oooo, lies served to cinderise, I especially loved that! You executed this so brilliantly!

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