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Friends to your Face

You said that you are my friend but you act as an enemy…

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 5 months ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - October 2023
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Friends to your Face
Photo by Kingsley Osei-Abrah on Unsplash

My life isn't brilliant.

My life isn't great.

I go through scenic situations,

And I long to escape…

I search for blessings,

But they are right in my face…

I pray every day to win this race…

We move so fast,

With many intentions,

Instead of being verbally bold,

I'll sit back and listen…

Speak to me with positivity,

Help me to see the beauty

Within me…

It's either you are my friend
Or you act as an enemy!

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward) (Author)4 months ago

    👀

  • How about that

  • ThatWriterWoman5 months ago

    Well done here Lonzo! I really enjoyed the theme of this!

  • Grz Colm5 months ago

    Nice work!! Missed this one.

  • Michelle Decaire5 months ago

    Well done!

  • 🧡💚💙♥️

  • Wow, this is truly fantastic, Lonzo! What a powerful message beautifully written!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby5 months ago

    Great job my friend

  • Melissa Ingoldsby5 months ago

    A unfortunately true scenario for ourselves at times

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    Congratulations Top story🤗♥️🏆You are a popular guy !!!

  • Kendall Defoe 5 months ago

    Some people never see the difference! Great TS! 👍🏽

  • 😁😉🥹😆☺️😍

  • Novel Allen5 months ago

    Such truth in your words Lonzo. We all need that positivity to keep us going strong. Sometimes in just listening, we learn. very wise Top story.

  • Donna Fox (HKB)5 months ago

    I love the vibe of this piece! It's so wet written and holds such a powerful message!! Great work Lonzo and congratulations on Top Story!!

  • Dana Crandell5 months ago

    Well said, my friend! Congratulations!

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    Congrats on the TS.

  • Meg5 months ago

    Congrats on top story! Great poem :)

  • Lamar Wiggins5 months ago

    Solid message and an even more solid delivery! Well done, Bro!!! 😍💯😍

  • JBaz5 months ago

    Perfectly said. Congratulations

  • Naveed 5 months ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story

  • A. Lenae5 months ago

    This speaks to the shared humanity and vulnerability in seeking real connection, real understanding. Your portrayal of the safety and freedom that can be found when someone else sees beauty in us is really lovely. Great piece!

  • Donna Renee5 months ago

    you speak the truth here!!❤❤❤

  • Real Poetic5 months ago

    “I search for blessings, But they are right in my face…” 👏🏼👏🏼🩵

  • Margaret Brennan5 months ago

    First of all, congratulations on being awarded the status of Top Story. It really deserves it. I had a friend who was always after me to "change this", or "do that". Finally, I asked her if there was a certain criteria that needed to be met to have her friendship. I told her that if there was, I could just walk away. You're so right; accept me as I am, or not at all.

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