Friends to your Face
You said that you are my friend but you act as an enemy…
My life isn't brilliant.
My life isn't great.
I go through scenic situations,
And I long to escape…
I search for blessings,
But they are right in my face…
I pray every day to win this race…
We move so fast,
With many intentions,
Instead of being verbally bold,
I'll sit back and listen…
Speak to me with positivity,
Help me to see the beauty
Within me…
It's either you are my friend
Or you act as an enemy!
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Well done here Lonzo! I really enjoyed the theme of this!
Nice work!! Missed this one.
Well done!
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Wow, this is truly fantastic, Lonzo! What a powerful message beautifully written!
Great job my friend
A unfortunately true scenario for ourselves at times
Congratulations Top story🤗♥️🏆You are a popular guy !!!
Some people never see the difference! Great TS! 👍🏽
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Such truth in your words Lonzo. We all need that positivity to keep us going strong. Sometimes in just listening, we learn. very wise Top story.
I love the vibe of this piece! It's so wet written and holds such a powerful message!! Great work Lonzo and congratulations on Top Story!!
Well said, my friend! Congratulations!
Congrats on the TS.
Congrats on top story! Great poem :)
Solid message and an even more solid delivery! Well done, Bro!!! 😍💯😍
Perfectly said. Congratulations
Congratulations on your Top Story
This speaks to the shared humanity and vulnerability in seeking real connection, real understanding. Your portrayal of the safety and freedom that can be found when someone else sees beauty in us is really lovely. Great piece!
you speak the truth here!!❤❤❤
“I search for blessings, But they are right in my face…” 👏🏼👏🏼🩵
First of all, congratulations on being awarded the status of Top Story. It really deserves it. I had a friend who was always after me to "change this", or "do that". Finally, I asked her if there was a certain criteria that needed to be met to have her friendship. I told her that if there was, I could just walk away. You're so right; accept me as I am, or not at all.
Love this