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Fresh Cotton Sheets

A Sensational Challenge Entry

By Rosie J. SargentPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Coffee in twilight both creamy and smooth,

Odours of desire fill the lonely dim room.

Cocoa-rich palate deliciously divine; so sweet.

Hot water-bottle hugs, hmmm... Goldilocks heat.

Drapes are drawn yet the small window - ajar,

Outside rain plays softly, on a concrete guitar.

Fresh cotton sheets with buttoned-up seams,

Moonlily aura laced with scented dreams.

Cold bare feet wrapped in cool navy covers,

Toes wiggling around as forbidden lovers.

Reading slowly while the TV screen glows,

Speaking subtitle language of old comfort shows.

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Rosie J. Sargent

Hello, my lovelies! Welcome, I write everything from the very strange to the wonderful; daring and most certainly different. I am an avid coffee drinker and truth advocate.

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Comments (9)

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Sooo divine! You captured fresh, laundered coziness so well! This is beautiful :)

  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    I really enjoyed this

  • Ash Taylorabout a year ago

    Great work! I love how vivid the imagery is - I can feel each one of the sensations as you describe them.

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Amazing play on the senses! My favorite line- 'Outside rain plays softly on a concrete guitar.' Top story in my book. Great job!

  • Stephen Kramer Avitabileabout a year ago

    Loved this! So visual! (And audible, touchable, ?tastable? ?smellable?) but honestly, you hit all the senses. My favorite line was "Outside rain plays softly, on a concrete guitar." So good!

  • Phil Flanneryabout a year ago

    Very comforting

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful piece. Well done.

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    I felt like I could wrap myself up in this one 😁 Oozes comfort and softness, I love it 😁

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Aw, this is awesome Rosie! Love it!

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