Fresh Cotton Sheets
A Sensational Challenge Entry
Coffee in twilight both creamy and smooth,
Odours of desire fill the lonely dim room.
Cocoa-rich palate deliciously divine; so sweet.
Hot water-bottle hugs, hmmm... Goldilocks heat.
Drapes are drawn yet the small window - ajar,
Outside rain plays softly, on a concrete guitar.
Fresh cotton sheets with buttoned-up seams,
Moonlily aura laced with scented dreams.
Cold bare feet wrapped in cool navy covers,
Toes wiggling around as forbidden lovers.
Reading slowly while the TV screen glows,
Speaking subtitle language of old comfort shows.
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Rosie J. Sargent
Hello, my lovelies! Welcome, I write everything from the very strange to the wonderful; daring and most certainly different. I am an avid coffee drinker and truth advocate.
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Comments (9)
Sooo divine! You captured fresh, laundered coziness so well! This is beautiful :)
I really enjoyed this
Great work! I love how vivid the imagery is - I can feel each one of the sensations as you describe them.
Amazing play on the senses! My favorite line- 'Outside rain plays softly on a concrete guitar.' Top story in my book. Great job!
Loved this! So visual! (And audible, touchable, ?tastable? ?smellable?) but honestly, you hit all the senses. My favorite line was "Outside rain plays softly, on a concrete guitar." So good!
Very comforting
Beautiful piece. Well done.
I felt like I could wrap myself up in this one 😁 Oozes comfort and softness, I love it 😁
Aw, this is awesome Rosie! Love it!