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Freedom

From Flatulence

By Gerald HolmesPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Firstly feeling famished

Finally

Frenzied feeding finished

Feeling

Floating flotsam fizzing

Freed

Funky fiery filling

For

Flatulent freeing

Farting.

performance poetry
15

About the Creator

Gerald Holmes

Born on the east coast of Canada. Travelled the world for my job and discovered that kindness is the most attractive feature in any human.

R.I.P. Tom Brad. Please click here to be moved by his stories.

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  • Donna Fox (HKB)8 months ago

    This was such a comedic Tautogram, I love the direction you went with this!! Very funny! 😊

  • Donna Renee12 months ago

    Bahahahah hilarious 😁🤣🤣

  • Lol, awesome and hilarious!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Love this, and that ending 😅😅😅

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Comedic way of presenting this, I like the layout. Well done

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    Okay Gerald you made me laugh with that last word. Great job as always!!!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fun, funny, fantatic!!!

  • Superb job ❤️‼️

  • Michele Jonesabout a year ago

    Who knew Flatulence could be so entertaining?

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    hahaha. This was great. Love how you highlighted that all-important phrase. Well done.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    LOL! Clever and what a relief by the end...hahaha!! This was Fabulous :)

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