Poets logo

Four Weeks

A Poetic Free Verse Entry to the Keep It 100 Challenge

By Laura PruettPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read

It’s been four weeks –

Today marks your passage.

Still, I remember

Walking in,

And knowing it was over.

Even before I saw your slumped form,

I knew,

And when I called for help,

I knew no help could come,

For you were gone.

Still, I went through the motions,

Stayed on the line,

Counted along with the operator

With each compression (1 – 2 – 3 – 4),

But to what end?

You were already gone,

Gone before I even arrived.

It’s been four weeks,

But even later,

Even when it’s been

10, 20, 100, 10,000 –

Even then, I will remember you.

Author's Note: I wrote this poem as a contest entry for the Keep It 100 Challenge. I hope you enjoyed the read. I'd love to hear what you think, so please feel free to leave a comment, click the heart, and subscribe!

Free Verseheartbreaksad poetry

About the Creator

Laura Pruett

Laura Pruett, author of The Dwarves Of Dimmerdown and others.

Goodreads Twitter/X Facebook Amazon Author Website

Enjoyed the story? Support the Creator.

Subscribe for free to receive all their stories in your feed. You could also become a paid subscriber, letting them know you appreciate their work.

Subscribe For Free

Reader insights

Comments

There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment
    Written by Laura Pruett