Four Weeks
A Poetic Free Verse Entry to the Keep It 100 Challenge

It’s been four weeks –
Today marks your passage.
Still, I remember
Walking in,
And knowing it was over.
Even before I saw your slumped form,
I knew,
And when I called for help,
I knew no help could come,
For you were gone.
Still, I went through the motions,
Stayed on the line,
Counted along with the operator
With each compression (1 – 2 – 3 – 4),
But to what end?
You were already gone,
Gone before I even arrived.
It’s been four weeks,
But even later,
Even when it’s been
10, 20, 100, 10,000 –
Even then, I will remember you.
Author's Note: I wrote this poem as a contest entry for the Keep It 100 Challenge. I hope you enjoyed the read. I'd love to hear what you think, so please feel free to leave a comment, click the heart, and subscribe!
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Laura Pruett
Laura Pruett, author of The Dwarves Of Dimmerdown and others.
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