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For Your Boy's Birthday

Sometimes, even the best memories can break a heart.

By Cathy holmesPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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He's twenty-eight now.

You were pregnant that night. How

I Wish You Were Here.

Pink Floyd. Wish You Were Here.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Jeffrey Sparks12 months ago

    Loved the poem Cathy!

  • Rikke Krammeabout a year ago

    This made me cry.

  • ❤️✨

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Beautiful. 💕

  • Stéphane Dreyfusabout a year ago

    I'm very sorry. Lovely haiku.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    So much emotion...sending all the comfort and care :)

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    Very touching. I saw PF on the same concert tour on April 16, 1994 in Pasadena, CA. They were amazing and the light show was out of this world.

  • Oh this was so sad 🥺 Sending you hugs ❤️

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    A very heartfelt one ❤️ Love and hugs ❤️❤️

  • Great wishes still make great memories, and that's a great Haiku.

  • Moe Radosevichabout a year ago

    I’m forever lost on the dark side of the moon, this is great Cathy 😀

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Heartfelt!!!💖💖💕

  • Misty Raeabout a year ago

    Beautiful

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Sending hugs on this one. Song plays well with the emotion behind this Haiku.❤️

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