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For Your Boy's Birthday

Sometimes, even the best memories can break a heart.

By Cathy holmesPublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read

He's twenty-eight now.

You were pregnant that night. How

I Wish You Were Here.

Pink Floyd. Wish You Were Here.

sad poetry

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Jeffrey Sparksabout a month ago

    Loved the poem Cathy!

  • Rikke Kramme3 months ago

    This made me cry.

  • Dhawy Febrianti3 months ago

    Sad piece 😭

  • Dana Stewart3 months ago

    Beautiful. 💕

  • Stéphane Dreyfus3 months ago

    I'm very sorry. Lovely haiku.

  • Heather Hubler3 months ago

    So much emotion...sending all the comfort and care :)

  • Very touching. I saw PF on the same concert tour on April 16, 1994 in Pasadena, CA. They were amazing and the light show was out of this world.

  • Oh this was so sad 🥺 Sending you hugs ❤️

  • Gina C.3 months ago

    A very heartfelt one ❤️ Love and hugs ❤️❤️

  • Lisa A Lachapelle3 months ago

    Great wishes still make great memories, and that's a great Haiku.

  • Moe Radosevich3 months ago

    I’m forever lost on the dark side of the moon, this is great Cathy 😀

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  • C. H. Richard3 months ago

    Sending hugs on this one. Song plays well with the emotion behind this Haiku.❤️

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