Followed
My thirtieth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.
This is my thirtieth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena, though maybe a little less graphic but possibly more frightening.
The music I have chosen is Peter Hammill's "I Will Find You" originally from "Fireships"
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Is That Someone Trying The Door?
Did They Follow You Home Again?
Will This Terror Drive You Insane?
Are You More Frightened Than Before?
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Window Rattles. Is It The Wind?
Maybe A Vicious Intruder
With A Bloody Blade In Their Hand
Are They Now Here For Your Murder?
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Your Phone Is Dead, You Are Alone
You Know That You Were Followed Home
Your Time Is Short, The Lights Are Out
You Are So Scared, Theyβre In The House
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Your World Has Now Been Ripped Apart
That Vicious Blade Pierces Your Heart
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Comments (5)
That vicious blade pierces your heart! Loved that line! Awesomeeee poem!
Wow! Loved the darkness in this. Great work!
Great poem, Mike. Really well done.
That was definitely scary! Loved how the rhyming kept amping up the tension until the end. Wonderful :)
Horrific and dark. Good job, Mike!!!