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My thirtieth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
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This is my thirtieth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena, though maybe a little less graphic but possibly more frightening.

The music I have chosen is Peter Hammill's "I Will Find You" originally from "Fireships"

πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€

Is That Someone Trying The Door?

Did They Follow You Home Again?

Will This Terror Drive You Insane?

Are You More Frightened Than Before?

πŸ–€πŸ’€

Window Rattles. Is It The Wind?

Maybe A Vicious Intruder

With A Bloody Blade In Their Hand

Are They Now Here For Your Murder?

πŸ–€πŸ’€

Your Phone Is Dead, You Are Alone

You Know That You Were Followed Home

Your Time Is Short, The Lights Are Out

You Are So Scared, They’re In The House

πŸ–€πŸ’€

Your World Has Now Been Ripped Apart

That Vicious Blade Pierces Your Heart

πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€

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Mike Singleton - Mikeydred

Weaver of Tales, Poems, Music & Love

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    That vicious blade pierces your heart! Loved that line! Awesomeeee poem!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Wow! Loved the darkness in this. Great work!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Great poem, Mike. Really well done.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    That was definitely scary! Loved how the rhyming kept amping up the tension until the end. Wonderful :)

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Horrific and dark. Good job, Mike!!!

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