When days were young and full of life, to the forest would I go
and often sit on logs of moss, eyes watchful and in wait
one morn he strode with antlers tall, firm hand bent back my bow
yet pause it did when his gaze fell, on golden flowers of fate
Could let loose I that arrow cruel, upon unguarded head?
it seemed amiss and I dared not, until his eyes found mine
release did I, and arrow flew, to mighty flank embed
the aim was true but leap did he, away o’er fallen pine
With a curse I stood and loosed again, aware that he was flown
that fearsome crown of chestnut rack, slipped from out my grasp
and so stood I in grasses still, no prize to call my own
when trod my foot on flowers gold, that careful hand did clasp
While prongs would keep, petals did fade, yet no regret there lies
For now I see treasure is life, to all beneath the skies.
About the Creator
Joe O’Connor
New Zealander
English teacher
Short stories and poems📚
Please be honest- I would love your constructive feedback, as it's the only way I'll get better. Would rather it was pointed out so I can improve!
Currently writing James The Wonderer
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