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Love at First Sight

By Carly DoylePublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Handmade table (photo taken 2013)

Exhilarating—

Weighted with summer and the effort

of trying to absorb another person.

Eyes like cinnamon,

melted toffee pooling in your irises,

watching smoke pour from your lips.

I want an innate understanding of you,

your chemical makeup.

A commitment of trying to see the world

through someone else, and hope

you get the pre-existing conclusions.

By Pascal Meier on Unsplash

Holding onto each other while we crash

into swaying walls of subway cars,

laughing ourselves out of breath, gasping

for stale plastic air.

I am synthetically drawn to you—

The way your hands move to match your eyes.

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About the Creator

Carly Doyle

Writer, Librarian, Researcher, Activist. I could keep listing things but, hey, why don't you just take a gander at my writing?

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