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"Fleeting Hope Amidst Shadows"

Navigating the Struggles and Pursuit of Healing

By Jinky Colesio MagsicoPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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"Fleeting Hope Amidst Shadows"
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In a realm where shadows cast their hue,

"People say it's fine not to feel true."

But the repetition scrapes upon my core,

A phrase that echoes, taking its toll once more.

Soothing words, reminding that it's alright,

Yet the journey persists, the ceaseless fight,

To carry the burden of grief, to not be at ease,

To lift ourselves from despair, each day we seize.

Solitude enfolds, a smothering veil,

Muted cries resound, craving to prevail,

The anguish of a soul, yearning for release,

Lost in the void, unheard, aching in peace.

Craving an embrace, a true sense of embrace,

For we're all mere mortals, compelled through life's race,

Acknowledging stumbling in this rugged domain,

To endure, to flourish, to grasp moments, fleeting and sane.

But lost I remain, unsure how to mend,

Deep within my essence, where scars suspend,

Yet still, I persist, seeking life's tender zeal,

For within our trials, hope may eventually reveal.

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About the Creator

Jinky Colesio Magsico

Isaiah 60:22 "When the time is right, I, THE LORD, will make it happen"

SDA💖

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  • Teresa Renton9 months ago

    Beautiful poetry 😍

  • Naveedkk 11 months ago

    I enjoyed reading your work.

  • Kateryna Kovalchuk11 months ago

    beautiful poem!

  • Veronica Coldiron11 months ago

    What a beautiful poem! The movement has an arresting, unique rhythm that causes you to think about each line. Beautifully written! 😍

  • Sam Al11 months ago

    lovely

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