On the first day of love,
When hearts beat as one,
I'll write you a poem,
Underneath the sun.
The world feels so bright,
As love takes its flight,
And everything seems just right.
Nervous, yet excited,
Like butterflies in flight,
Your presence, a beautiful sight.
A future unknown,
Yet with you, it's shown,
That love will always be sown.
On this first day of love,
I promise to be true,
Forever and always,
I'll be here for you.
So here's to the first day,
Of a love that's so true,
May our hearts beat as one,
In everything that we do.
About the Creator
Sorrowful Whisper
Just willing to Die
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By Morgan Longforda day ago in Chapters
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Invoked my emotions!
Awww this was so wonderful! Beautiful poem!