Fill my Dimensions
A submission for Raymond G. Taylor's brevity challenge
This poem is my respond to the challenge prompt: ”Oh Jeff, I love you too, but..” - you can read about it here, because the picture matters! It is Roy Lichtenstein's "I love you but" from 1964.
I feel so square and dimensionally flat
You kill me with your charming chat
I want you to buy me diamonds and fullness
To take me out where I can be frameless
You should smoothe my jailing raster
First then you can be my master.
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Henrik Hageland
A poet, a writer of feelings and hope. A Dane and inhibitant of the Earth thinking about what is to come.
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