Fever Dream
it isn't supposed to make sense
Someone took my nose,
and I wanted it back, so
I built a sailboat
*
out of comic books
that my dad used to read me
when I was feeling
*
ill, and I paddled
through the ocean of my own
tears using the same
*
flip flop I lost when
we braved the shore of quicksand
to save my fallen
*
kite. Then a tired gull
asked if she could perch on my
head so she could fly
*
again at twilight
when it was easy to find
jewelry lost to
*
the tide. A peace
of my mind is still missing
from the fever dream.
About the Creator
Sam Eliza Green
Wayward soul, who finds belonging in the eerie and bittersweet. Poetry, short stories, and epics. Stay a while if you're struggling to feel understood. There's a place for you here.
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