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Immediate, and not what I wanted to hear

By Meredith HarmonPublished 3 months ago • 1 min read
Ow, wow, how! Image made by me, with Craiyon AI.

Hello? (Wello? Ello? Mellow?)

Can you hear me? (Fear me? Near me? Ear me?)

If you can hear this (Fiss, Miss, Hiss)

Let me know? (Ho. No. Go.)

Testing, testing? (Westing? Esting? Mesting?)

Are you out there? (Where? Cher? Hair?)

Did you (screee) when I (wah waah waaaah)?

Can we (eeeeeeee), or do I (womble farble blah)?

Am I (keeeeeeeeee), or is it (ooooo-eeeeee wah wah)?

What about (waah-bohhh, waah-bohhh, scrackeckack)?

How about (craaaaaahhhhhhheeeeeeeesksksksksksksksk)?

tap-tap-tap (ap-app-appp)

Does this help? (elp, yelp, elf)

What about now? (ow, ow, ow!)

Sigh… (Eye, aiii, ayyy…)

Look (ook, ook, ook)

Can you (woo, woo, ooh)

Just (ust, uss, sss)

Ugh! (uhh, hunh, unhhh)

Can I just (SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!)

Guess not (bot, hot, ott)

Giving up now (gibbon hupp owwww)...

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Meredith Harmon

Mix equal parts anthropologist, biologist, geologist, and artisan, stir and heat in the heart of Pennsylvania Dutch country, sprinkle with a heaping pile of odd life experiences. Half-baked.

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    Written by Meredith Harmon