Drowning in the intensity of your stare, I almost forget to breathe. Like an
Insect being studied underneath a microscope , your laser focus is on me.
Squeamish because it's clear that you are predator and I am prey, I
Try to run but it's as if my feet have somehow been muddled . Heart
Racing damn near beating out of my chest, all I can think of is escaping.
Animosity seeps from your pores and I swear I can smell the stench of
Corpse on you. She got away though, or at least that's the story I've
Told myself. This was supposed to have been the highlight of our little
Island getaway. How were we to know that our tour guide led us astray?
One drink too many, roofied by the handsome stranger in the black suit,
Naivety got me here. My world fades to black , as you ensure I never leave.
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