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Farewell

A Tautogram

By Shane DobbiePublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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Fascist fiends foment fallacies,

Floods find footing.

Fools frolic for fame,

Fabulous flora flounders.

Faith feigned for fortune,

Fair forests forgotten.

Friends, families, forgo facts,

Fatal frosts foretold.

Foul fumes from factories,

Flowers finally fade.

Farewell.

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Shane Dobbie

If writing is a performance art then I’m tap dancing in wellies.

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  • Mackenzie Davis22 days ago

    This must have been very difficult, but you make it look easy. I’m impressed! Also, the flow is masterfully achieved.

  • Dana Stewart2 months ago

    Well done!

  • Caroline Jane2 months ago

    Oof! That stings. Well done.

  • Ahna Lewis2 months ago

    Very well done! You share some powerful words on the direction this world is heading. And that last line is haunting!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Very nicely done.

  • Kelly Robertson2 months ago

    Well done! Powerful messages in so few words. Great job!

  • Mariann Carroll2 months ago

    Nice messages in the poem 👍🥳

  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    Damn, this is...stunning and such an important message. Masterfully put together!

  • Ashley Lima2 months ago

    This is incredible. Nice work!

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    Oh my, this is breathtaking in it's form, structure, and message. Well done!

  • River Joy2 months ago

    Wow. This hit me in the heart. Beautiful words. Powerful effective messaging. Well done.

  • A very creative way to cover so many aspects and fields of social commentary. I had to look up "foment" because I was only use to seeing the more archaic definition and use of the term.

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