Pawel Kuczynski, "Adam and Eve," 2014
Our enigmatic origins have been
The subject of many peculiar tales;
Sacred, secular, lofty and obscene
Many involve a villain with bright scales
A purveyor of knowledge forbidden
Of life delicious and of bitter death
Of moral truths and distinctions hidden
Which spell out how we draw and waste our breath
All explain how, as characters, we must
Obey our author and fulfill his plan
But our own writing is seldom discussed
To hide, perhaps, where the story began
When a story declares itself divine
It seeks to hide the truth of its design
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D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.
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Comments (6)
Gosh this was so profound and thought provoking? What is the actual truth? We may never know. Loved your poem!
yeah, well you don't need to see the pictures.....geez. I wish this platform would not insist on them( except for ekphraistic pieces) This is fine work, D. J. Slick, layered, astute. I have not been around of late. I just do not have the energy to create and share on this platform as I have in the past. I have struggled to stay, using the prompts to keep my pencil sharp, but when I see how much ( and how often) mediocrity is rewarded here, it just hurts my writer's heart too much. ( btw - his majesty had an epic game last night...fingers crossed for game 7) do stay in touch if you would. find me on whatsapp or facebook. i enjoy your wit, your wiles, and your company.
Omg I totally missed the snake 🐍 at the top!
So cool and loved this ironic line particularly “Which spell out how we draw and waste our breath”. 😄 I can’t believe this artwork is called Adam and Eve. Very much liking your inspiration and creativity here, Mr D.J.
Loved this! I love your pieces and how the placement of each photo pairs well with the imagery that your words create.
The true history of human origin, is still interesting. Especially the human component itself. I hope I didn't misinterpret this poem. Your poem is good!