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Falling, Soundless

A Link in a Haikuplet Chain

By Mackenzie DavisPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
Falling, Soundless
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My lover’s warm lips,

Sunshine breaks through heavy clouds,

Piercing winter’s grasp.

                   

Cliff-face echoes hush,

smoldering a fetter. She

colors me in: blush.

               

                    

A/N: This is for Kenny Penn's Haikuplet Chains Challenge! There are still six days left. Go check it out!

Though it might not be allowed, I decided to write a link to the haikuplet that Kenny wrote, accessible via the previous link. Per the rules, I kept the first haiku and wrote a different second. If anyone wants to continue it, please do! I'm enthralled by the story.

Kenny, if this isn't allowed, that's fine. I may write an extra link in case it doesn't count, hahaha. (Goodness, that might also be against the rules...) Regardless, I had fun!

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Mackenzie Davis

Popping in for a brief season. A small bubble has surfaced and will burst again soon, no doubt. New stories expected at unexpected times. Vocal is for challenges.

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    Written by Mackenzie Davis