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Falling

A Poem About Sleep-Falling

By Carol TownendPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Falling
Photo by Tom Sodoge on Unsplash

Falling;

Down and down we go,

No light, no ground,

Just falling,

Will I ever find the land?

Hands out,

Steadying myself,

Twisting and turning,

Dizzy from being turned upside down.

Falling;

Falling, floating through space,

No walls to hold to steady my pace.

Falling;

Down,

Down,

Into the black abyss,

Twisting,

Turning,

Upside down,

Dizzy again, from being on my head.

I shut my eyes as I spin,

Now standing straight,

Feeling woozy without being boozy.

Falling faster,

Down,

Up

Around,

Back down like a bullet.

I hear an alarm clock shrieking in the distance,

Then I wake up;

Oh shucks, now I have to get up for work!

Can't I just go back to sleep, and,

Enjoy falling?

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About the Creator

Carol Townend

Fiction, Horror, Sex, Love, Mental Health, Children's fiction and more. You'll find many stories in my profile. I don't believe in sticking with one Niche! I write, but I also read a lot too.

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Comments (4)

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Lol, I prefer falling than going to work. Loved your poem!

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    Amazing work Carol.

  • Belleabout a month ago

    Lovely, and beautifully written, Carol ❤️

  • Emil indwabout a month ago

    sleeping at night for a long time is a dream. Your poem is great!

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