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Fall ๐Ÿin Love in Autumnโ™ฅ๏ธ

Change your mind to let love inside, it shall execute good to your heartโ€ฆ

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 7 months ago โ€ข Updated 7 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
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Fall ๐Ÿin Love in Autumnโ™ฅ๏ธ
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Fall ๐Ÿ in Love in Autumn!

๐Ÿ’‹

I raked more leaves ๐Ÿ‚

As he stared at meโ€ฆ

Through his gaze,

I could hear his, Silent whispers in the chilled waft.

He raked up my heart,

And we danced

In the leavesโ€ฆ

His love keeps me floating,

Like a dandelion

In a breezeโ€ฆ

I shed the baggage

That I didn't need.

โ™ฅ๏ธ

I felt Liberation-

I was surrounded by the Principles

Of Loveโ€ฆ

โ™ฅ๏ธ ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ โ™ฅ๏ธ ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿโ™ฅ๏ธ ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ โ™ฅ๏ธ ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ โ™ฅ๏ธ ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿโ™ฅ๏ธ ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿงก โ™ฅ๏ธ ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿงก โ™ฅ๏ธ ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿงก โ™ฅ๏ธ ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

Welcome to โ€œMy Public Diary โ€œ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿ’–

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  • Teresa Renton7 months ago

    You sure did make it beautiful ๐Ÿ˜

  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    This is lovely.

  • Lovely words though I fell in love a long time ago, but I think you may have guessed that ๐Ÿ˜Š

  • Denise E Lindquist7 months ago

    A picture of beauty๐Ÿ‚โค๏ธ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜Š

  • Cendrine Marrouat7 months ago

    The last stanza is very Dikinson-ian. Great job!

  • Novel Allen7 months ago

    Lonzo your heart is so filled with love, Autumn is such a lovely colorful time to dance within the leaves. This was so freeing and wonderful.

  • Catherine Nyomenda7 months ago

    โคโค

  • ThatWriterWoman7 months ago

    A gorgeous moment of freedom and letting go of the past to fall into newness - I really love this!

  • ๐Ÿ‚โค๏ธ๐Ÿ

  • Deasun T. Smyth7 months ago

    ๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’ฏ.

  • AL. K.7 months ago

    Beautiful poem!

  • Nothing like helping someone working outside when you're kinda crushing on them to begin with. I once scooped an entire snow-covered drive for four apartments just because I thought the manager was beautiful, lol.

  • Tiffany Gordon 7 months ago

    gorgeous work! I also needed to hear this message! Awesome job!๐Ÿ˜Š

  • I shed the baggage that I didn't need. Gosh I loved that line so much! Beautiful poemA

  • Brenton F7 months ago

    The title got me on this one! "I shed the baggage/I didn't need" Y E S ! ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ‘

  • Babs Iverson7 months ago

    Pure love!!! Loving the Autum and your wonderful poem!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’•

  • โ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿโ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿโ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿโ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ

  • Darkos7 months ago

    also in love in Autumn ๐Ÿงกโ˜บ๏ธso good to read Your poem about falling in love ! ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ

  • Jay Kantor7 months ago

    hi-'h' ~ So nice to see you've built such a reputation ~ 'j'

  • Hank Moody7 months ago

    Love it!

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