Fall ๐in Love in Autumnโฅ๏ธ
Change your mind to let love inside, it shall execute good to your heartโฆ
Fall ๐ in Love in Autumn!
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I raked more leaves ๐
As he stared at meโฆ
Through his gaze,
I could hear his, Silent whispers in the chilled waft.
He raked up my heart,
And we danced
In the leavesโฆ
His love keeps me floating,
Like a dandelion
In a breezeโฆ
I shed the baggage
That I didn't need.
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I felt Liberation-
I was surrounded by the Principles
Of Loveโฆ
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About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Outstanding
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Comments (21)
You sure did make it beautiful ๐
This is lovely.
Lovely words though I fell in love a long time ago, but I think you may have guessed that ๐
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The last stanza is very Dikinson-ian. Great job!
Lonzo your heart is so filled with love, Autumn is such a lovely colorful time to dance within the leaves. This was so freeing and wonderful.
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A gorgeous moment of freedom and letting go of the past to fall into newness - I really love this!
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Beautiful poem!
Nothing like helping someone working outside when you're kinda crushing on them to begin with. I once scooped an entire snow-covered drive for four apartments just because I thought the manager was beautiful, lol.
gorgeous work! I also needed to hear this message! Awesome job!๐
I shed the baggage that I didn't need. Gosh I loved that line so much! Beautiful poemA
The title got me on this one! "I shed the baggage/I didn't need" Y E S ! ๐โค๐
Pure love!!! Loving the Autum and your wonderful poem!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
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also in love in Autumn ๐งกโบ๏ธso good to read Your poem about falling in love ! ๐๐๐๐๐๐
hi-'h' ~ So nice to see you've built such a reputation ~ 'j'
Excellent
Love it!