I'm not a dinosaur, though you tell me so.
I'm very much here, determined not to go.
You may aim your words like meteorites
Or hope I'll slink off and away in the night
But I'm very much a part of this world,
Am holding on grimly with my hands that curl.
I like to sit and spout home truths, which hook
And barb and fester; pierce you with a look -
You quail at the wisdom of the ancient crone
Whose seen it all, done it all and drives it home.
I hunt your loose opinions to maim
The youthful optimism they contain.
Shake them, tear them to pieces and devour:
I can't allow positivity to flower.
My domain must remain dark and spiteful
Thorny tangles with vines impenetrable;
Enter the jungle! You will become trapped
And I will ensnare you, in my jaws wrapped
Where I can chew you slowly bit by bit
And wear you down with my corrosive spit.
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Your mottled skin, your tarnished breath, your eyes -
Bloodshot lasers to cut us down to size.
You are a monster in a monstrous shell
Demanding your respect, to be treated well -
But there's nowhere expansive with views so narrow
Your company so bleak it begins to harrow.
Top of the food chain is a lonely place-
You'd love people to come and share your space
But in this, you will find you are always beaten:
To survive, the good will avoid getting eaten.
They're looking outwards to much brighter things:
Like hot orbs from heaven, quickly descending
To rock your limited world, impact your sphere,
Telling you things that you won't want to hear,
Presenting you with a grander world view
Which may, in future, or may not include you.
Perhaps you'll survive if softer you become
Start singing a tune that we can all love
And from negativity try to sever
And brighten that flesh with colourful feathers.
For someone so wise, you are lacking instinct.
You're in danger, old bird, of becoming extinct.
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Comments (5)
I'm so happy to see that you've used it as a metaphor! I was talking to Donna and told her that I wanted to use it as a metaphor but realised that they wanted an actual dinosaur. I told her I'd still do a metaphors if amy idea came to me but lol, none came. So reading this made me so happy although it was a poignant poem. Well done, Super Rach!
Ooh, a metaphorical dinosaur. I love these lines: "holding on grimly with my hands that curl" and "you're in danger, old bird, of becoming extinct". Good luck in the challenge!
Love these lines: You are a monster in a monstrous shell Demanding your respect, to be treated well Great entry Rachel - very clever.
Excellent challenge entry, Rachel, with some really wonderful lines and a jolting finish. I especially loved “brighten that flesh with colorful feathers.” I loved it so much I read it twice!
Great use of split perspective in this! And the rhyme gave it a consistent cadence. Like the mash up of animalistic dinosaur imagery with the concept of a human dinosaur! Admittedly, I did a bit of it for mine but in a narrative format, but the juxtaposition comes across much better in yours!