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An expert she’s not
even though
she’s striving and fighting
second to many.
she’s not
the first and the best
she is
afraid but not discouraged
trying to be better
fake it till you make it
they say
that is her prayer
every day
to be better.
About the Creator
Merrie Sanders
Writing for fun and as an escape from the everyday. After all, what is life for if not to create?
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Comments (1)
This is excellent! You have nailed the concept of the inverse, and your poem flows both ways so nicely. “the first and the best she is afraid but not discouraged” are such strong lines where the meaning of the poem turns in the middle. Well done😊