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Exotic Body Parts

In Dysarray

By Gerard DiLeoPublished 24 days ago • 1 min read
Top Story - November 2023
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Things are easier when you break them down.

You say your anatomical snuff box

Cannot accommodate my proboscis

And my hairy glabella

Is not my best seller

.

And your lovely lunulae

Wave me off every day

All of your body parts, mundane and exotic

Are fuel for my drives, untamed and erotic

.

Inhale my seductive nostrum

Placed right under your philtrum

Don't deny the scratch for my itch

That persists as pruritic acnestis

.

You narrow your canthi

When giving me stink-eye

But paired dimples of Venus

Provoke spread of my genus

.

So why keep your legs akimbo

Just to offer me Limbo?

Perhaps your parts would be better

If they weren't so altogether

.

I could have a bag, for each part, titular

A collection of each part singular

And every very lonesome now and then

I could put you back together again

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About the Creator

Gerard DiLeo

Now in Phase II of my life in Hull, MA. Tangential thinking, amygdaloid incentives, and hippocampal flashes from left to right on the page. (Phase I: New Orleans.)

https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/

email: [email protected]

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  • Novel Allen22 days ago

    How perfectly morbid. Remind me never to come near you. Ugh! Herman and Leticia Munster would be proud. Kudos TS.

  • Dana Crandell22 days ago

    Well, you pulled a Star Trek. "Boldly went there." LOL Well done!

  • Margaret Brennan22 days ago

    congratulations on TS. This was brilliant.

  • Reminds me of one of my most favorite films May. Putting a friend together with different parts 😳 Very good use of language here

  • This was so stunning and biological! I hope that makes sense, lol. Loved your poem!

  • Manisha Dhalani23 days ago

    Very unique way of presenting this - I enjoyed reading your words.

  • Rachel Deeming24 days ago

    Surreal, chilling and clever. I'm more clued up on body parts now too.

  • Kendall Defoe 24 days ago

    Oh, I like this, esp. the words I think I know! This is really clever and well done, like my last girlfriend's pudendum...! ;)

  • Babs Iverson24 days ago

    Terrific & surreal!!!💕❤️❤️

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