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Escape me to Summer

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By Teresa RentonPublished 2 years ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read
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Escape me to Summer
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Summer is the party dress of seasons;

A cool clear sea

washes summer heat

from glistening skin.

When evening wraps its magic cloak

around star-speckled shoulders,

an electric charge ignites

a summer flame.

*

Watch it flicker

to a breeze of breathy romance,

or a foot-tap to music

in open air,

while a percussion of ice-cubes

clinks in glasses and bubbles

of laughter and fizz

merge in a haze of harmony.

*

The song of summer distracts

gravity itself,

As a myriad of feet

lifts off the ground and dances

in step to a sound

of intoxicating drumbeats.

Even time pirouettes anti-clockwise

infusing stiffened limbs with youth

and lifting lips to soften

ageing features.

*

Lift, lift and lift me up, summer;

for all too soon, cascading

chills of winter

will curl our bodies into blankets

for warmth by hygge firesides.

The clock will tick again

to goad time; and summer dreams

will distort reality

in the most rational of minds.

*

And I will allow this,

I will submit,

because you light me up

when you wear the sultry

party dress of the seasons:

Summer

* * * * *

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About the Creator

Teresa Renton

Inhaling life, exhaling stories, poetry, prose, flash or fusions. An imperfect perfectionist who writes and recycles words. I write because I love how it feels to make ink patterns & form words, like pictures, on a page.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    A very wonderful and lovely poem! I love the ocean and dresses!

  • J. S. Wade2 years ago

    Beautiful capture of summer. Felt like a wonderful date here. 🥰 Kudos

  • Caroline Jane2 years ago

    Summer is definitely the most comfortable of seasons. Great poem.

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Beautiful! So many lovely images and word choices. I definitely felt the comfort and joy in summer (and it's my least favorite season), well done :)

  • Well done!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Loving your inspirational poem!!!

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