Escape me to Summer
poetry
Summer is the party dress of seasons;
A cool clear sea
washes summer heat
from glistening skin.
When evening wraps its magic cloak
around star-speckled shoulders,
an electric charge ignites
a summer flame.
*
Watch it flicker to
a breeze of breathy romance, or
a foot-tap to music in open air,
while a percussion of ice-cubes
clinks in glasses and
bubbles of laughter and fizz
merge in a haze of harmony.
*
The song of summer distracts
gravity itself,
As a myriad of feet lifts off the ground
and dances in step to a sound of
intoxicating drumbeats.
Even time pirouettes anti-clockwise
infusing stiffened limbs with youth
and lifting lips to soften ageing features.
*
Lift, lift and lift me up, summer;
for all too soon, cascading
chills of winter
will curl our bodies into blankets
for warmth by hygge firesides.
The clock will tick again
to goad time
and summer dreams will distort reality
in the most rational of minds.
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And I will allow this, I will submit,
because you light me up when you wear
the sultry party dress of the seasons:
Summer
About the Creator
Teresa Renton
Inhaling life, exhaling stories, poetry, prose, flash or fusions. An imperfect perfectionist who writes and recycles words. I write because I love how it feels to make ink patterns & form words, like pictures, on a page.
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Comments (6)
A very wonderful and lovely poem! I love the ocean and dresses!
Beautiful capture of summer. Felt like a wonderful date here. 🥰 Kudos
Summer is definitely the most comfortable of seasons. Great poem.
Beautiful! So many lovely images and word choices. I definitely felt the comfort and joy in summer (and it's my least favorite season), well done :)
Well done!
Loving your inspirational poem!!!