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Erased

A Sonnet That Lost Most of Its Rhymes

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
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No more words of any kind or colour

Even some insults would have been welcomed

But there would be nothing to curse me for

And she is the type who adores actions

Summer is too cold wherever I am

Behind my cooled walls or around the bend

Sentences cannot be explained again

And time is more precious when intended

But the space between us has expanded

We were closer before Canada Day

Even closer before Xmas supper

And as close as possible before then

O Athena whenever you smiled last

Truer love seemed to belong to the past

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Ben Folds - Erase Me

sad poetry
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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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