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Disappointment

A Deceptive Acrostic Sonnet

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
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Discovering one’s lesser importance

Involves a bruised ego but also pain

Spreading out like spilled blood in discordance

Atrophying self-worth, love and the brain

Perchance ’tis momentary or farfetched

Possibly a rare event not to swell

Only that it feels partisan and etched

In the mind and the chest where it will dwell

Nothings, she declares, adding some what ifs

Transposing what is dearer as if clear

Methinks I can’t win or join the sophists

Everything now seems to appear austere

Negating it will only make it worse

The future may be headed in a hearse

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Dedicated to fiction.

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Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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