In your eyes, I see the stars,
A thousand glittering lights.
In your touch, I feel the world,
A place of endless delights.
Of all the things that I adore,
None compare to you, my love and more.
My heart beats fast when you are near,
And all my worries disappear.
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The Wyrm King
'The Wyrm King' the third and final volume of Beyond the Spiderwick Chronicles by Tony DiTerlizzi and Holly Black. In this volume the fantastical characters are really showing themselves and their various talents. Nick and Laurie and family and still learning and making compromises as well as promises trying to be kept in helping the Nixie's and the other people and entities. Nick along with all the others learn how to help each other past and present. Once again Holly Black's artwork would make great coloring pages. All of these books thanks to Tony and Holly were great show and tell books for all ages.
By Mark Grahama day ago in Critique
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Hey there, I just read your poem and I have to say, it's really great! The way you play with words and use vivid imagery really draws the reader in and makes them feel like they're right there in the moment with you. Your writing has a certain rhythm and flow that's just mesmerizing. I can tell you put a lot of heart and soul into this piece, and it definitely shows. Speaking of poetry, I just published a new piece myself that I think you might enjoy. It's a bit different from what you've written here, but I think you'll appreciate the emotional depth and honesty that I've tried to convey. Check it out and let me know what you think - I always love getting feedback from other poets! https://vocal.media/poets/love-s-lyrical-journey