Elements of Love (that you ignore)
An octet poem of confusion

Why won't you talk to me?
We might have some chemistry
But if you never talk to me
Then how will we ever see?
We text, but in case you forgot
Sometimes words are cheap
Whether you believe it or not
I might just be the one you seek.
π₯π₯π₯π₯
But love is more than words
It is touch and sight as well,
So if you wonβt you talk to me?
Then it is time to say farewell.
π₯π₯π₯π₯
Look into my eyes
What do you see?
There can be no disguise
Itβs my heart that you can see
Surely there is no surprise
Or do you disagree
If you never look into my eyes
There will be nothing for you to see
π₯π₯π₯π₯
But love is more than words
It is touch and sight as well,
So if you wonβt you look at me?
Then it is time to say farewell.
π₯π₯π₯π₯
Take your hand place it with mine
Together we could have been one
You didnβt even see the sign
Of what could have begun
Instead, you sent words every time
True loving feelings, I saw none,
It could have been divine
Iβm left with nothing, not a single one
π₯π₯π₯π₯
Love is more than words
It is touch and sight as well,
No talk, no touch, just texting me?
Then it is time to say farewell.
π₯π₯π₯π₯
[Author's note: A series of three octet stanzas separated by a repeating quatrain interlude. The poem reflects the frustration these days where dating is (initially) all about texting rather than the other elements of falling in love - talking, looking and touching.]
Till next time,
Calvin
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