Eclipsing
Inspired by the eclipse acrostics I read.
By Chloe GilholyPublished 19 days ago • 1 min read
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Extra ways to heal myself by climbing up this hill.
Cutting out the toxic people that caused my tears.
Like all the bad seeds are gone from my anxious life.
I spent some time fixing my fuck-ups and boundaries.
Parisian adventures and Portuguese resorts are so healing.
Solo learning is making me learn what freedom means.
Ever wanted to say fuck off, so badly?
About the Creator
Chloe Gilholy
Former healthcare worker and lab worker from Oxfordshire. Author of ten books including Drinking Poetry and Game of Mass Destruction. Travelled to over 20 countries.
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (5)
I like how the alliteration in some of the lines gives it flow, and it’s a strong message Chloe! “Like all the bad seeds are gone from my anxious life.” is a line I liked🤗
"Ever wanted to say fuck off, so badly?" YES! Very relatable. I loved this poem!
Wonderful acrostic poem!!! Very inspirational & loved it!!!💕❤️❤️
I have felt like this many times. I heart your feelings.
Best closing line to this challenge I've read so far... 👌 🖕🏾