E - Earth lines up with the moon and sun
C - Catalysm to disasters of old
L -Lunar eclipse happens at the full moon
I - I’ve seen many an eclipse in my life
P - People who view the solar eclipse wear special glasses
S - Solar eclipse depends on how the earth, moon, and sun line up
E - Enthusiasm abounds
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Death is a black hole. Think about it. A black hole is the corpse of a star, something once warm and bright, now come to the end of its life cycle. But some will argue that the cycle of life does not end with death. That death is merely another path we must walk once our bodies expire and our souls ascend. In that moment, when the fuel in the star’s chemical tank hits empty and the shiny matte coat explodes into supernova, the mass left behind – the corpse – becomes a black hole. We understand that, around such a vast cadaver, dimensions work a little differently in death to the way we’re used to in life. For example, light cannot escape the pull of a black hole when it hits the point of no return. That’s where it gets its colour. Space itself is contorted by a black hole. That’s where it gets its funny shape. Even time. Time slows right down the closer you get to it. The closer you get to a black hole. The closer you get to death.
By Matthew Curtis4 days ago in Humans
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Oooo, you've seen many eclipses! That's so cool! Loved your Acrostic!
As direct as the sun in my eyes; thanks for sharing M.C.!
Direct and poetic at the same time....love it
Educational at the seem time your experience of the eclipse. Nicely done, Sharon ❤️🌒
Beautifully expressed & loved it!!!💕❤️❤️
And the solar eclipse occurs when the moon's waning is complete & the waxing has not yet begun. Nicely poemed, Mother.