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Drowning in Love

A rare feeling

By Elin ViktoriaPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Drowning in Love
Photo by Jeremy Bishop on Unsplash

This love is rare.

It pulls me under your stare

Drags me beneath it’s waves

And drowns me from inside out.

Nothing about it is shallow

It’s as deep as the ocean’s depths.

If I scream it won’t echo

For this feeling is boundless.

I can’t catch my breath

As I tumble through your fingers

Wrapped around my heart

I feel you squeeze my lungs.

“Does it hurt?”

Oh, the oldest phrase in the book.

May be for a little while,

But without love everything goes numb.

You drain me now

Of all the water you used to fill me up.

But this love is rare,

So how could I not care?

Fingernails scraping into the ocean floor,

Grabbing at pebbles, at rocks, at sand.

You can’t pull me out now,

I won’t survive in the open air.

It’s warm down here.

Or have I merely forgotten the temperature up there.

Under the sun could be nice

Like an open fire, or is it more like ice?

No, I must not lose sight

Of this drawn out fight.

I’m clinging on

For dear life.

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About the Creator

Elin Viktoria

Your neighborhood dreamer finding any and all ways to romanticize life.

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