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Drowning

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By Samantha PodobnikPublished 7 years ago 1 min read
S.L. Podobnik

Drowning in my thoughts of you

Each breath a struggle,

A curse,

A nightmare.

You're the only one who can set me free

Give me wings.

As I fall deeper into my mind,

My heart leaps with the sound of your voice

Just a few words passing your lips could make my body sing

Please! I beg of you save me from all this pondering

I just need to know,

Do you care for me as I care for you?

Do you see me as I see you?

Am I just a passing whim,

Or is my presence actually worth a damn?

I'm Here... Drowning,

Drowning in my thoughts of you.

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