Dreaming of Love
I thought about you last night...
When I opened my eyes you weren't anywhere in sight...
I sit on the stone Bricks near the River,
Where Daylight changes into Dusk.
I watch the Misty Moon Float in the Blackness of the sky.
Why Couldn't it be you and I?..
Sometimes I Feel you belong with me...
I'm starting to realize
in my Dreams, you will always be.
I thought we were Good Together...
It should've been us together forever...
It should've been us.
I still can't believe
My future exists with a peculiar Love...
But I Long for your Indication
Just so my Heart can feel that auspicious vibration.
Thousands of Miles Across the world,
Desolate and Alone lies my Heart...
Desiring a True Love Story of a Boy and a Boy,
Who's Heart I'm wishing was my Home.
It should've been us!
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Nice one Lonzo 🙂
“My future exists with a peculiar Love... But I Long for your Indication.” Felt thaat shit. Well done
Love this. Very moving.
I think this one is my favorite. I guess because there is solitude, loss, but also a heart that's still full of love. I know that feeling too well. This was such a beautiful piece and the artwork certainly added to the experience! LOVED this!
I love how you allow the presumptions of a heterosexual mindset to flow with your words until, just three lines from the end, you shatter our illusions & invite both our hearts & our minds to expand to include others. It helps remind me that, just because I support & advocate for the LGBTQ+ community, doesn't mean that I've completed my own work on my own biases & assumptions. Thank you for this gift you have shared with us, for your courage & willingness to be vulnerable.
Wow. I love this. These words (or shall I say I fall victim to the same scenario) resides with me as well. The difference with my situation is that its me dreaming of being with an essential worker whom I very good friends with but can’t date due to a breach of contract with both of our employers. God knows “it should have been us” crosses my mind every time I see him coming.🥰
Good job and congratulations on your top story.
Love the imagery here! Congrats on top story!
Terrific job capturing that big empty chasm feeling most of us know and wish we didn't!
Perfect. I watch the Misty Moon Float in the Blackness of the sky.
"I sit on the stone Bricks near the River, Where Daylight changes into Dusk ..." so evocative!
Such beautiful, heartbreaking, raw emotion! Also, congratulations on Top Story!
You wrote such an elegant heartache. Well done and congratulations on your Top Story 😄🤗
This is both beautiful and heartwrenching! sublime, Lonzo! congrats on Top Story!
Loved the powerful emotions here! Congratulations on your Top Story!
gorgeous work Zo! Congrats on your latest Top Story! 😊
Beautiful and very relatable. Speaks the truth.
Damn bro. You got me right in the feels. Man, I hope Your heart gets filled with the love that makes You feel like You're always welcomed and that it's a home, the place where Your heart belongs.
Relatable AF. 💔 Beautifully written.
Beautiful Lonzo. Congratulations.
Timeless. Classic. Beautiful. 💖
A beautiful emotional piece. Congratulations