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Dreaming of Love

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 months ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
Dreaming of Love
Photo by Sarvatra Rawat on Unsplash

Dear, Anonymous

I thought about you last night...

When I opened my eyes you weren't anywhere in sight...

I sit on the stone Bricks near the River,

Where Daylight changes into Dusk.

I watch the Misty Moon Float in the Blackness of the sky.

By Alexander Andrews on Unsplash

Why Couldn't it be you and I?..

Sometimes I Feel you belong with me...

I'm starting to realize

in my Dreams, you will always be.

I thought we were Good Together...

It should've been us together forever...

It should've been us.

I still can't believe

My future exists with a peculiar Love...

But I Long for your Indication

Just so my Heart can feel that auspicious vibration.

Thousands of Miles Across the world,

Desolate and Alone lies my Heart...

By Jordan Steranka on Unsplash

Desiring a True Love Story of a Boy and a Boy,

Who's Heart I'm wishing was my Home.

It should've been us!



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  • Moe Radosevichabout a month ago

    Nice one Lonzo 🙂

  • Lovely words

  • Jordan Flynn2 months ago

    “My future exists with a peculiar Love... But I Long for your Indication.” Felt thaat shit. Well done

  • Matthew Batham2 months ago

    Love this. Very moving.

  • JANE AYU2 months ago

    Very beautiful

  • Veronica Coldiron2 months ago

    I think this one is my favorite. I guess because there is solitude, loss, but also a heart that's still full of love. I know that feeling too well. This was such a beautiful piece and the artwork certainly added to the experience! LOVED this!

  • I love how you allow the presumptions of a heterosexual mindset to flow with your words until, just three lines from the end, you shatter our illusions & invite both our hearts & our minds to expand to include others. It helps remind me that, just because I support & advocate for the LGBTQ+ community, doesn't mean that I've completed my own work on my own biases & assumptions. Thank you for this gift you have shared with us, for your courage & willingness to be vulnerable.

  • Robin J2 months ago

    Wow. I love this. These words (or shall I say I fall victim to the same scenario) resides with me as well. The difference with my situation is that its me dreaming of being with an essential worker whom I very good friends with but can’t date due to a breach of contract with both of our employers. God knows “it should have been us” crosses my mind every time I see him coming.🥰

  • Joe Patterson2 months ago

    Good job and congratulations on your top story.

  • Meg2 months ago

    Love the imagery here! Congrats on top story!

  • Roy Stevens2 months ago

    Terrific job capturing that big empty chasm feeling most of us know and wish we didn't!

  • JBaz2 months ago

    Perfect. I watch the Misty Moon Float in the Blackness of the sky.

  • Sonia Heidi Unruh2 months ago

    "I sit on the stone Bricks near the River, Where Daylight changes into Dusk ..." so evocative!

  • Donna Fox2 months ago

    Such beautiful, heartbreaking, raw emotion! Also, congratulations on Top Story!

  • Loryne Andawey2 months ago

    You wrote such an elegant heartache. Well done and congratulations on your Top Story 😄🤗

  • Brin J.3 months ago

    Very beautiful.

  • Paul Stewart3 months ago

    This is both beautiful and heartwrenching! sublime, Lonzo! congrats on Top Story!

  • Loved the powerful emotions here! Congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Tiffany Gordon 3 months ago

    gorgeous work Zo! Congrats on your latest Top Story! 😊

  • Madison Newton3 months ago

    Beautiful and very relatable. Speaks the truth.

  • Thavien Yliaster3 months ago

    Damn bro. You got me right in the feels. Man, I hope Your heart gets filled with the love that makes You feel like You're always welcomed and that it's a home, the place where Your heart belongs.

  • Naomi Gold3 months ago

    Relatable AF. 💔 Beautifully written.

  • Beautiful Lonzo. Congratulations.

  • Leslie Writes3 months ago

    Timeless. Classic. Beautiful. 💖

  • JBaz3 months ago

    A beautiful emotional piece. Congratulations

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