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Don’t Waste your time hating your Waist

Homophonic Poem

By Diani AlvarengaPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Don’t Waste your time hating your Waist
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“What a waste”, they said to me, “just look at your waist”,

I simply wish that all of this fat in me could be erased.

I waste so much money on junk food, not healthy food,

and because of that, my waist does not look really good.

But I care so much about taste, forgetting about my waist,

I ignore what my weight is, so I don’t feel ashamed to waste.

But there shouldn’t be anything wrong with lacking a flat belly.

Sometimes, having a loose belly is seen as being very healthy.

My waist is beautiful, I should just ignore the criticism of the rest

Besides, I rather waste money on food than waste time on the rest.

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Diani Alvarenga

I love to write and share my stories with others! Writing is what gives me peace.

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  • Carol Townend4 months ago

    Well written and well said!

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