Don’t Waste your time hating your Waist
Homophonic Poem
“What a waste”, they said to me, “just look at your waist”,
I simply wish that all of this fat in me could be erased.
I waste so much money on junk food, not healthy food,
and because of that, my waist does not look really good.
But I care so much about taste, forgetting about my waist,
I ignore what my weight is, so I don’t feel ashamed to waste.
But there shouldn’t be anything wrong with lacking a flat belly.
Sometimes, having a loose belly is seen as being very healthy.
My waist is beautiful, I should just ignore the criticism of the rest
Besides, I rather waste money on food than waste time on the rest.
About the Creator
Diani Alvarenga
I love to write and share my stories with others! Writing is what gives me peace.
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Well written and well said!