Driving long distance with nothing to look at
In an infinite cycle of boredom – ugh, nausea — trapped, my
Senses spiral. They whir frenetically like a…
Train Station! The bustle of acoustically charged hubbub bouncing off of linoleum vibrates the snail in my ears — Oh no, some poor kid lost their balloon. I wonder how many balloons there are in outer space —
Rooted somewhere in my psyche, I know the ruckus isn't real. But the noise; so loud!
Asphalt ahead, asphalt behind, ass —
There! Look at those two! They're — oh...
I'll just give them a little privacy — ope, there goes another insect to the windshield; that's eleven so far.
Overcompensating for ennui, the brain makes its own entertainment to block out the odious white noise of monotony. Speaking of noise, how about some music? Dancing Queen, young and sweet, only seventeen —
Never give me the wheel on a road trip. The journey was pretty exciting though, right?
About the Creator
College student, amateur photographer, and aspiring actress looking into getting back into writing. In the process of writing a short story and a sci-fi/historical-fiction novel that I’d like to publish one day.
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Original narrative & well developed characters
Niche topic & fresh perspectives