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Dizzy, I fall into your pink sunshine

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By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Dizzy, dazed and dazzled

I fall into your pink pools of sunshine

Saturnine smooth skin that I adore, I fall into your heart and I

Trick myself to stay alert

Risking it all

A daring feat to scare off a weak and mad raven

Clouds crumbling in your Goddess grasp

Turning it into a citrus mist

Icy over the landscape

Oval eyes that tower over the earth so ethereal and mysterious

Nothing will stop me from holding your tender blushing velvet azul tears, as I kiss them tender-warm in your dizzy sunshine pools

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

I am a published author on Patheos,

I am Bexley by Resurgence Novels

The Half Paper Moon on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.

My novella The Job and Atonement will be published this year by JMS Books

Carnivorous published by Eukalypto

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  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    The last line extending beyond the short bursts of the rest of the piece accentuates the theme!

  • Oh wow, I learned a new word today; saturnine! Your poem was so wonderful, Merly!

  • ThatWriterWomanabout a year ago

    Woah! I love how you write descriptions! Nice!

  • J. Delaney-Howeabout a year ago

    This is great. Flows nicely. Nice work!

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