DISTRACTION
colours pictures sounds games books people food
Distorted dreamscapes designed
Inside inattentive I. Imaginative
Soundbath stimuli, soul serenading!
Too tantalizing to tend to tasks…
Responsibilities rot, resentfully
Abandoned, awaiting action. Avoidance and
Carelessness collide, capturing
Twice the terrific, titalating
Interference. It's inescapable!
Otherworldly objects obscure onus,
Negate needs. Necessities neglected.
About the Creator
Eloise Robertson
I pull my ideas randomly out of thin air and they materialise on a page. Some may call me a magician.
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The Longest Minute
A minute. Sixty seconds to say goodbye. That’s all the time that I had left with him as the needle slid into his leg. I stared into his drooping eyes, looked at the blood-tainted saliva dripping from the corner of his mouth. They said that this was the best thing that we could do for him, a last kind act for a best friend…but if that were the case, then why did my heart feel so heavy?
By Stephanie Hoogstad5 days ago in Fiction
Comments (3)
This is a great entry. Well done.
Very clever take on the challenge and maybe it'll be a Top Story. I don't drop into Short Form Challenge entries that much but your image caught my eye and your words are even better. Excellent work
Phenomenal.