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Dim sum

Haiku Honey challenge entry.

By Lamar WigginsPublished 5 months ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read
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Dim sum
Photo by Mulan Sukrisno on Unsplash

Cantonese heaven;

an all-day prepping affair,

rewards the palate

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Looks like I picked the wrong week to go on a diet 😁. Thanks for stopping by 😍

This is a challenge entry for the VSS (Vocal Social Society) FB group. You can find all the details here if you would like to join in.

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Lamar Wiggins

Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry. Take a chance, you'll be thoroughly entertained.

"Life is Love Experienced" -LW

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  • Jay Kantor3 months ago

    J-bro ~ Yum want some DimSum ~ Arigato ~ Remembering: When on tourist-tours in Japan we were given binto-boxes with crushed-inside deep fried treats on a stick; always my favorite. btw; you sore at me for using 'Baby Mama' remarks of yours you've written from other writers? I'd really-really like your opinion/slant on "Baby Mamas" when you have a moment. J-bro

  • Donna Fox (HKB)5 months ago

    Hahah! Definitely the wrong week to go on a diet!! I love this, but now I'm hungry!!

  • Heather Hubler5 months ago

    Oh man! I am getting so hungry reading all these haikus. That looks amazing :) Great choice!!

  • Nice wording-Mmm 👀📝👌Yeah, you've picked the wrong week for a diet, that looks delicious❗

  • This was a scrumptious Haiku! I loved it!

  • I guess so, lol!

  • Teresa Renton5 months ago

    What a reward indeed 😊

  • Tiffany Gordon 5 months ago

    Beautifully done!

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    Yummy haiku. Well done.

  • Kristen Balyeat5 months ago

    So tasty! No joke about that prep work! Great haiku, Lamar!

  • Alex H Mittelman 5 months ago

    Love the Haiku!

  • Celia in Underland5 months ago

    Boom! Yes! Dimsum are the absolute best! 🤍

  • Novel Allen5 months ago

    Sounds like you all are speaking an alien language, hope the aliens are paying attention. Such foods to tempt the devil himself. Great job Lamar.

  • Paul Stewart5 months ago

    This is fantastic! Love how you encapsulated everything great about them in so few words! Well done, pal!

  • Real Poetic5 months ago

    Never tried these before. I’ll have to take your word for it and give it a try.

  • Caroline Jane5 months ago

    "An all day prepping affair" That can be taken in many ways! Love it! Thanks for joining the party. 🥰 Hope you do more!! ❤

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Terrific and tummy yummy!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Veronica Coldiron5 months ago

    Certainly made me want Cantonese!

  • PK Colleran5 months ago

    OMG. Makes me hungry !! Love it.

  • Donna Renee5 months ago

    Yummmm!!! Yeah definitely the wrong week for a diet 🤣

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