Your kiss is whiskey:
Love, I assume. (But it’s just)
eighty-percent proof.
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-Gina C. 🧚♀️✨
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Updated Version (Not a haiku...I think I like this one better):
Your kiss is whiskey-smooth:
Love, I assume. (But it’s just)
eighty-percent proof.
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Author's Note: Just a little haiku for today - I hope it makes sense! 🫣
This poem is part of my "Ghosts of Relationships Past" series, where I reminisce about old love experiences of mine, gone bad. :) ❤️ Follow for more drama!
This is Poem #2 of my personal "Poem-a-Day" challenge. ☺️ Can I keep it up? We shall see. 🫣
About the Creator
Gina C.
Achievements:
- Twice-published in Vocal's Moment of Freedom Collection:
Free-Form poet of ethereal style🧚♀️✨
Fantasy writer
A sucker for a good rhyme
Follow my Ghosts of Relationships' Past series:)
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Comments (11)
Cool Haiku Gina! 😊👍
Mind blown! How cleverly composed! Diluted! 80% proof! Brilliant!
Fantastic!!! Nailed it!!!❤️❤️💕
Oh yeah! This turned out so freaking awesome!! And the pic really worked well. Excellent one for the series :)
Yes! I know those types. Well done, my friend.
Yes! Love the haiku, telling a whole story in so few words. Also love the picture as well.
Oh! Interesting.
There's always someone who loves the other more in a relationship and it sucks to be that person. Loved your Haiku!
LOVE THE TATTOOS
Love the tattoos on their necks that represents (to me) how invested each one is. Great work, Gina C.
Awww , but well said Gina, a lot in so few words