The Provocative Desires,
The yearning that never ceases
Neither day and night;
I can't ignore
I burn in passion;
An eternal flame
Aching, crying out, begging for
Thee
The need for that moment;
That tender moment of your lips;
adjoining mine.
The caress of your hand upon my face
the feel of my arms wrapped around you
my fingers gently touching your silken hair.
I cannot fight this feeling anymore:
I don't want to fight it
My white flag is out
To surrender to thee.
I anguish in my thoughts
I await your terms
For I Long;
To get lost in you
And never ever return.
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Bruce Curle `
A Fifty something male that enjoys writing short stories, scripts and poetry. I have had many different types of work over my lifetime and consider myself fairly open minded and able to speak on many topics.
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