Deliberately Obtuse
Abecedarian Challenge Entry
avoid the obvious
beyond the ordinary
cauterize the old ways
defy the conventions
euologise the traditions
fenestrate the cultural norms
gouge away like pixies on what is expected
hack the hacks
invent the unnecessary
just write
keep writing
like the masters
masters of their own craft
nuisances of form and order
obtuse, deliberately obtuse
pass the point of no return
quit the quiet ways
reap the creative beast
shield not the words that need to be spoken
trust your inner voice
use it
vex the naysayers
wax lyrical
xox to the critics
you can because you can
zephyr away from the tried and tested to victory
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Author's Note: Thank you, Mackenzie. You helped inspired this a little.
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Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
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Comments (14)
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"trust your inner voice use it vex the naysayers wax lyrical xox to the critics you can because you can zephyr away from the tried and tested to victory" Need I add more to your gorgeous? This is one of my favorites, Paul. Just beautifully rendered. I see echoes of our past conversations in here. This helps me feel boosted in my endeavors, my friend. Thank you for writing it. ❤️ PS: xox to the critics, indeed. A struggle to do so, but necessary.
‘gouge away like pixies’ !!! 💕🎶 You already know that’s my favorite line, but I reread this multiple times and every word was needed. I love how you carried this powerful message throughout all 26 lines. When I saw the title, I thought deliberately obtuse would be an insult. I thought, “Here go hell come, Paul wrote a diss track.” I’m a little sad you’re not rapping again. But this is a most delightful perversion of calling someone obtuse. Yes! Let go of the rules. Lose yourself.
I have to agree with the other comments here: xox to the critics is my favourite line!
Xox to the critics! That was my favourite! This Abecedarian was awesomeeee! 🍩🥐
Another masterpiece…✅🤩 Thanks Paul. Love… “ fenestrate the cultural norms.” I attempted to learn Italian when at school 🥹… finestra (window) was one word which stuck! Defenestrate is delightful too!
Paul, you sure know how to have fun the explicit and implicit use of language. A wonderfully arch poem.
Fabulousy constructed- XO the critics-Brilliant!
This is amazing!! In particular, "cauterize the old ways" is such a powerful line. Well done!
Pssst! Looks like you missed K!
Wow, I love how this is put together and written. Beautiful work!
Giving the timing and the title, I was really excited to see if you borrowed the "xylophone-Zambia" verse I started cooking. But this works on its own, so well done
Brilliant & beautiful!!! Love it!!!♥️♥️💕
This is, dare I say it, quite the juxtaposition of message and structure!