Dear Earthlings
Observations from afar
Dear Earthlings,
I find your actions quite confusing
All these resources you are using
Plastics and strip mines and CO2
What the frack is the matter with you?
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Billionaires sold their souls for a buck
Captains of Industry run amuck
Polluting then diluting mistrust
Convincing you plastic straws are suss
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There seems no end to your consumption
Listen to Greta, she’s got gumption
Look out for the trees and the fishes
Things won’t change on mere hopes and wishes
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Where I come from we have a saying
That’s if you are planning on staying
Zergle zim bong zip dong zap zong zeet
Translated means: ‘don’t shit where you eat’
Sincerely,
John Q. Alien
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I'd like to thank Donna Renee for helping me smash my writer's block!
Here are some links to a few organizations helping us clean up our act:
About the Creator
Leslie Writes
Another struggling millennial. Writing is my creative outlet and stress reliever.
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Comments (22)
Congrats!! 👏🏼
Congratulations, Leslie! I love the humor woven into this important message. Well done!
I missed this one. Can see why it got singled out. Emotive, timely and funny too. Love it. Congrats.
Terrific Leslie.🪴 Huge congrats on your placement in the challenge !! 🎉☺️
Congratulations! And this is all so sadly true :(
This is great! Congratulations 🎉
So very glad to see this one win! Congratulations 🎊🎉🎊❤️
Yahhhhh!!!!! Congratulations 🎉🎊🎈🍾
Incredible, Congratulations friend🎉🎉💖🎉✨✨🎉🎉💖❗❗❗❗
Leslie Writes...and wins! Congrats on getting on the runner-up list with this one!
Congrats Leslie! I really enjoyed this one! Creative and fun, but also really meaningful.
Oh Yay!!!! Congrats, Leslie!! 😁😁😁
Congrats, Leslie
Smart message with humor and bit of Dr. Seuss (seussical) influence. Delightful poem!!! 💖💖😊💕
Omg love it! Exactly should be number one issue for everyone! We don't get another planet! Well done ❤️
Don't eat where you shit! That was spot on. Loved this poem so much!
The alien picture caught my attention right away lol. Then the alien talk started (put a smile on my face) Cute story :-)
This is excellent. Love the alien language. lol.
"Zergle zim bong zip dong zap zong zeet" - very wise words!
the poem raises important issues......
Hahaha I love how this turned out so much! 🤣 That photo you created is perfect too! 👏 Aww and you are so welcome 😁🥰
Nice one❤️💯📝