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Dear Earthlings

Observations from afar

By Leslie WritesPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Epistolary Challenge
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Dear Earthlings,

I find your actions quite confusing

All these resources you are using

Plastics and strip mines and CO2

What the frack is the matter with you?

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Billionaires sold their souls for a buck

Captains of Industry run amuck

Polluting then diluting mistrust

Convincing you plastic straws are suss

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There seems no end to your consumption

Listen to Greta, she’s got gumption

Look out for the trees and the fishes

Things won’t change on mere hopes and wishes

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Where I come from we have a saying

That’s if you are planning on staying

Zergle zim bong zip dong zap zong zeet

Translated means: ‘don’t shit where you eat’

Sincerely,

John Q. Alien

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I'd like to thank Donna Renee for helping me smash my writer's block!

Here are some links to a few organizations helping us clean up our act:

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About the Creator

Leslie Writes

Another struggling millennial. Writing is my creative outlet and stress reliever.

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  • Joelle E🌙about a year ago

    Congrats!! 👏🏼

  • Aphoticabout a year ago

    Congratulations, Leslie! I love the humor woven into this important message. Well done!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    I missed this one. Can see why it got singled out. Emotive, timely and funny too. Love it. Congrats.

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    Terrific Leslie.🪴 Huge congrats on your placement in the challenge !! 🎉☺️

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Congratulations! And this is all so sadly true :(

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    This is great! Congratulations 🎉

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    So very glad to see this one win! Congratulations 🎊🎉🎊❤️

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Yahhhhh!!!!! Congratulations 🎉🎊🎈🍾

  • Incredible, Congratulations friend🎉🎉💖🎉✨✨🎉🎉💖❗❗❗❗

  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    Leslie Writes...and wins! Congrats on getting on the runner-up list with this one!

  • Ahna Lewisabout a year ago

    Congrats Leslie! I really enjoyed this one! Creative and fun, but also really meaningful.

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    Oh Yay!!!! Congrats, Leslie!! 😁😁😁

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Congrats, Leslie

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Smart message with humor and bit of Dr. Seuss (seussical) influence. Delightful poem!!! 💖💖😊💕

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Omg love it! Exactly should be number one issue for everyone! We don't get another planet! Well done ❤️

  • Don't eat where you shit! That was spot on. Loved this poem so much!

  • Mrs. Wifey Chroniclesabout a year ago

    The alien picture caught my attention right away lol. Then the alien talk started (put a smile on my face) Cute story :-)

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is excellent. Love the alien language. lol.

  • "Zergle zim bong zip dong zap zong zeet" - very wise words!

  • Quincy.Vabout a year ago

    the poem raises important issues......

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    Hahaha I love how this turned out so much! 🤣 That photo you created is perfect too! 👏 Aww and you are so welcome 😁🥰

  • Nice one❤️💯📝

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