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Dear Angel


By Moe RadosevichPublished 5 months ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read
Dear Angel
Photo by Christophe Van der waals on Unsplash

dear angel,

I’ll never forget that one last breath,

when your body succumbed to the clutches of death,

“I begged you to breathe” as I squeezed you tight,

I was desperate to cancel your angelic flight,

you donned your wings, away you flew,

how helpless I was, nothing I could do!

your ravaged body had run the test,

my soul assured me this was best,

so now through memories you live in my heart,

they’re all I have since death us did part.

sincerely, waiting

Thank you for reading 😊

sad poetry

About the Creator

Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

Write on my friends

Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

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  • Mackenzie Davis2 months ago

    “Sincerely, waiting.” Ohh, I really love that. The grief you portray in a speaker so determined to be okay is very real to me. I felt similarly when my grandpa died. 💗

  • Heather Hubler5 months ago

    This was so incredibly touching and bittersweet. I could feel the pain and the relief and the longing. Beautifully penned, my friend :)

  • Gina C.5 months ago

    This pulled at the heartstrings...beautifully done!

  • Phil Flannery5 months ago

    I loved that. It seems strange trying to give positive feedback, when the subject is sad.

  • Lamar Wiggins5 months ago

    Wow! Everything came together so perfectly. Great read, Moe!

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Emotional & heartfelt!!! Left some love!!!

  • Grz Colm5 months ago

    Moe, your poem is wonderful - poignant and powerful in such a small amount of words.

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    Beautifully melancholic. Well done.

  • This was so sad yet very beautiful written!

  • Dana Crandell5 months ago

    Sad and beautiful. Nice one, buddy!

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